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My sweet Syringe
My sweet syringe
Oh how you tease me,
can take my life
or make my life
oh so very easy.
As I sit
and as i wait
the time is passing by.
I'm moments away
seconds away
from reaching internal "HIGH".
My sweet syringe
My sweet syringe
your pain becomes my pleasure,
your sharp and silver needle
and the lines I use to measure.
But very soon
yes, very soon
your the one to hurt me.
I overdose
or underdose,
and eventually you kill me.
©2008-2009 ~orochirama10
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needles are my best friend.

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The very beginning doesn't flow for me. But the rest is good.
Except for the quotation marks. I don't like those. Seems like too much attention to that word. Either capitalization or quotes, but I think both is over the top.

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No one I think is in my tree
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well im glad you liked it
kinda? it makes since to me. i forget it has to make since to the audience too!! <3

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I :heart: Orochimaru!

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